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For my own, I thought I’d share a little of the beginning of my expanded version of At Her Service. It was part of Nine Star Press’s Once Upon a Rainbow Volume 2 anthology until the rights reverted to me. I thought I’d take the opportunity to change some parts readers objected to, developing others a little more. This is just a little longer than six sentences, forgive me…
I’ll never forget the first time I glimpsed my mistress’s ankles. She wasn’t yet my mistress. She was just Ariella, the bewitching girl with sapphire blue eyes and a husky voice I could feel caressing the inside of my ear, gliding down my spine, raising the hairs of my neck every time she spoke.
“You will address her as the Lady Ariella.” The lady of the chateaux spoke in a cold, menacing voice as flat as her eyes. How could she look so much like Ariella herself, yet be so different?
Such a beautiful introduction to the characters! ❤️
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Great descriptions!
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Definitely an enchanting description.
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How could she look so much like Ariella herself, yet be so different? – loved this line
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Love that last line!
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