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My own is from my recently submitted ‘Seven Tricks’, a Christmas tale inspired by ‘The Nutcracker’. It’s a much more mouse sympathetic spin on ‘The Nutcracker’, with elements inspired by A. T. A. Hoffman’s tale, ‘The Nutcracker and the Mouse King’.
“Do you wish to understand the speech of humans?” Madam Mousenip chittered in my ear. “’Tis a strange chatter, but it can be useful.”
“You can speak to these giants?” I asked, awed and a little afraid. “What does a mouse possibly have to say to a human?”
“Less than you can imagine and far more than you’d ever want to hear,” she said a little dryly. “However, if you listen, you can discover when they’re leaving, where they’re storing food, and plan accordingly.”
Ooh, I love the concept! Nutcracker is a favorite story. I’m definitely interested in something mouse-sympathetic. 🙂
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Thank you! It was curious how the idea bloomed in my head, as I was reading the original premise of the mouse bite giving someone an ugly face. Suddenly, Mousetrick was squeaking with outrage in my head, “What do you mean, an ugly face?! He’s beautiful! Just look at the jaw!” From this, my story grew. 🙂
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Oh, I love this! 🙂
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Thank you!
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I like this! I’m immediately pulled in and want to read more…
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Thank you! Here I was worried this snippet might be a little boring by itself, but I’m really glad to hear you enjoyed it!
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I am now going to communicate only in written code regarding food storage.
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LOL!! 🙂
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Love the answer to what does a mouse have to say.
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Thank you! Madam Mousenip was one of those characters who came to me with incredible ease. I had as almost as much fun writing her as I did Mousetrick and Cracktooth. 🙂
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*lol* Love this! I can’t wait to get to know these characters better. 🙂
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Thank you! 🙂 They were quite a lot of fun to write! 🙂
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Love this! Looking forward to more
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Thank you! It means a lot hearing that, since this story was rejected, when I submitted it for the first time. 😦 However, I haven’t given up. I submitted it to another publisher, so here’s hoping it does better the second time! (fingers crossed)
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