#RainbowSnippets: At Her Service

Welcome to Rainbow Snippets!

Every Saturday or Sunday those participating post and share six sentences of LGBTQIA+ fiction on their blogs. They can be their own. They can be someone else’s. They just need to be LGBTQIA+.

For my own, I’m going to continue with the extended version of At Her Service I’m working on…

She hit me, a sharp, glancing blow which might have been no more than a slap to a sturdier woman. It knocked me off my feet, left my cowering at hers. 

“How dare you?” I’ll never forget the angry snarl of hatred which distorted her face. What I’d seen chilling within her eyes and pinched lips had finally been set free.

I whimpered at the sight of that hatred, covering my head with my hands. 

7 thoughts on “#RainbowSnippets: At Her Service

    1. No, it was actually “how dare you?” to Cinders’s question about it being her father’s house, but yes, it’s still in b-territory. (wry grin) I’ve just decided to rewrite this beginning so she may well be worse in the new version. (another wry grin)

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